主播:Jerry I翩翩
配樂: Wonderful world----Sam Cooke
Today’s topic:How to make a sentence better?
Rule 1:使用形容詞和副詞!
She sing
→(Beautiful )Mary sings (happily).
*給she一個(gè)名字,并選一個(gè)形容詞描述she;
*給動(dòng)詞加副詞,描述怎樣唱。
Rule2:Add details 加細(xì)節(jié)
怎么加“細(xì)節(jié)”?超簡(jiǎn)單——— 5w1h 原則!
5W=who ,what ,when ,where, why
1H=how
Beautiful Mary sings happily.
→(During midnight),beautiful Mary sings happily (in the magic forest)( to wake the scary dragon).
在午夜時(shí)分,美麗的Mary在魔法森林里開心地唱歌,想要喚醒可怕的龍。
3.Change weak words to stronger words 將弱勢(shì)詞變?yōu)閺?qiáng)有力的詞
使用stronger words能直接呈現(xiàn)出一個(gè)scene(場(chǎng)景)。
Practice:
①Nena goes to school.
(Grumpy ) Nena,(an eight old years girl),(unfortunately )goes to (a private) school (through a bus)( every day).
②Jerry teaches.
(Every Saturday ) (muscular) Jerry ( passionately ) educates (English ) (at ASeat) ( to 3rd grade students) ( because he enjoys being with kids).
Homework
你英語(yǔ)老師喊你做作業(yè)啦!
使用改寫句子的3條黃金法則,請(qǐng)給下面這個(gè)句子化化妝,使其變成一個(gè)熠熠生輝的句子。
I go to the park.